Jareth in his Ballroom outfit. Some tips on dressing him: It might work better to bend one arm all the way back and remove the sleeve off that arm, then proceed to the next arm. Remember to pull out his collar if it gets stuck and to tuck in the white shirt. You may have to bend his thumbs down when dressing him.
For the 13th Hour outfit: It's natural for the feather boa to shed a little. Put the necklace on first. The bulge doesn't really work for this outfit :/
I can add you to my Potential Commissioner's List. Basically I'll message you when I reopen commissions (which is a few months from now) and see if you're still interested in commissioning me and we'll take it from there